Hidden Canyon in Irvine
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Come on now..dear realtor, let's not go crazy with the embellishments
"Superior Irvine schools..." are you talking about the unbuilt No. 5 school on the toxic waste land? What high school the HC is going to be zoned into? What elementary school the HC is going to be zoned into? Alderwood Elementary (which is already overcrowded due to LA's influx)?
"Excellent shopping" - there is no shopping center nearby, certainly not within walking distance. Unless you want to buy something for your neighbors at Laguna Altura across the street.
"Easy access to freeways" - yes, true!
"Entertainment, recreation, and employment centers" - Are you talking about the One-Stop Center near Irvine Spectrum (aka unemployment office)?
Probably not. What you probably mean to say is proximity to work or something like this.
"Prestigious central Orange County" - LOL. Santa Ana is technically in the central Orange County and is hardly "prestigious." Whoever designated "central" Orange County as "prestigious"? "Prestigious Irvine" is probably more accurate.
"Residents of Hidden Canyon will enjoy the relaxed atmosphere of quiet suburban living with superior Irvine schools" - wrong sentence structure, you need to rewrite this or you will sound line a moron. What you probably meant to say is "residents of Hidden Canyon will enjoy the relaxed atmosphere of quiet suburban living, superior Irvine schools, excellent shopping, and easy access freeways, entertainment, recreation, and employment centers. No one wants to enjoy the quiet suburban living WITH superior Irvine schools.
Have someone proofread your ads, just my two cents (since you are probably targeting the highly educated crowd).
Other than that, you are on track!
Thank you for your interest in Toll Brothers at Hidden Canyon, a gated community of luxurious homes located in prestigious central Orange County. We are sure you will be impressed by Hidden Canyon's two outstanding collections of home designs and look forward to the model grand opening in early 2015. With homes set amongst the secluded hillsides of Irvine, residents of Hidden Canyon will enjoy the relaxed atmosphere of quiet suburban living with superior Irvine schools, excellent shopping, and easy access freeways, entertainment, recreation, and employment centers. We have your contact information and will share exciting new information on Hidden Canyon with you as it becomes available. We appreciate your interest and look forward to welcoming you to your new home soon! Toll Brothers Sales Team
Meggie said:
Come on now..dear realtor, let's not go crazy with the embellishments
"Superior Irvine schools..." are you talking about the unbuilt No. 5 school on the toxic waste land? What high school the HC is going to be zoned into? What elementary school the HC is going to be zoned into? Alderwood Elementary (which is already overcrowded due to LA's influx)?
"Excellent shopping" - there is no shopping center nearby, certainly not within walking distance. Unless you want to buy something for your neighbors at Laguna Altura across the street.
"Easy access to freeways" - yes, true!
"Entertainment, recreation, and employment centers" - Are you talking about the One-Stop Center near Irvine Spectrum (aka unemployment office)?
Probably not. What you probably mean to say is proximity to work or something like this. "Prestigious central Orange County" - LOL. Santa Ana is technically in the central Orange County and is hardly "prestigious." Whoever designated "central" Orange County as "prestigious"? "Prestigious Irvine" is probably more accurate.
"Residents of Hidden Canyon will enjoy the relaxed atmosphere of quiet suburban living with superior Irvine schools" - wrong sentence structure, you need to rewrite this or you will sound line a moron. What you probably meant to say is "residents of Hidden Canyon will enjoy the relaxed atmosphere of quiet suburban living, superior Irvine schools, excellent shopping, and easy access freeways, entertainment, recreation, and employment centers. No one wants to enjoy the quiet suburban living WITH superior Irvine schools.
Have someone proofread your ads, just my two cents (since you are probably targeting the highly educated crowd).
Other than that, you are on track!
I wanted to get Toll Bros. approval before posting floor plans, etc. With that said, I am posting 10 floor plans, rec. center plans and the site plan for Hidden Canyon: enjoy!
Other items of note:
* 1.5% Tax Rate
* Nominal Mello-Roos for Irvine School District: $400.00/month
* Model grand opening anticipated in early 2015. Construction does not begin until home is purchased. Opening scheduled for Winter 2015.
* 2 Collections: Capri & Marbella. Both offer five unique home designs featuring 5 bedrooms and 5.5 bathrooms, spacious California rooms and expansive glass door systems.
* Home sizes from 4,200 sq. ft. up to just under 6,000 sq. ft.
* Up to 4 car garages
* Downstairs master bedrooms
* Detached casitas
* Volume ceilings
* Dual staircases
* Second floor decks
* Multi-generation suites
* Schools (preliminary):
Elementary: Alderwood
Middle: Rancho San Joaquin
High School: University
Other items of note:
* 1.5% Tax Rate
* Nominal Mello-Roos for Irvine School District: $400.00/month
* Model grand opening anticipated in early 2015. Construction does not begin until home is purchased. Opening scheduled for Winter 2015.
* 2 Collections: Capri & Marbella. Both offer five unique home designs featuring 5 bedrooms and 5.5 bathrooms, spacious California rooms and expansive glass door systems.
* Home sizes from 4,200 sq. ft. up to just under 6,000 sq. ft.
* Up to 4 car garages
* Downstairs master bedrooms
* Detached casitas
* Volume ceilings
* Dual staircases
* Second floor decks
* Multi-generation suites
* Schools (preliminary):
Elementary: Alderwood
Middle: Rancho San Joaquin
High School: University
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Make mine Marbella 1.